TYPE SPECIMEN BOOK correction.

i changed some colors-
and put red dots , sky blue color more-as you suggest me to do-
what do you think?
too many colors??
ah- and color will be little bit different when I print on paper-
because my paper color is gray-
so it will be changed--

UPDATE PSA again-

I changed the color composition-
what do you think? is it better than before?
I just wanna make it like new york's feeling-
actually i thought ny is more like colorful like before one-
but I also thought too much bright color could be really messy-
so I choose little bit dark colors- is it too darky??
i wanna tone down little bit because my composition seems like busy also-
what do you think?gen?
isn't it little bit too busy?
please give me some advices--